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want to tell . . .

i wanna tell you...

That i love
running off down the pub
and sitting there till im drunk
drink my drink until its sunk

i am totally addicted
to this lushious amber liquid
better than dropping acid
because the feelings much more placid

if you feel that same
like to drink to numb your brain
party hard with no shame
and love the drinking games

then raise you glass
and raise it for fun
say "fuck it all"
then down in one.

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  • Symphony
    October 8, 2008

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    hey i'm irish. old friends with jack, daniel, southie & sammie smirnoff

    Ha, this was an enjoyable read I'd love to hit the pub now and down a few with you mate but sadly work calls lol!


  • teddybare gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    i got a small buzz just reading it

    love it .. light hearted poems are a good break from the tear jerking norm.. not that there anything wrong with the tear jerkers ..but everyone can use a mood lightener from time to time and it also flows quite nicely i could even recite it drunk off my booty


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 5, 2008

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    HAHAHA... I love it!!

    Gosh.. I've numbed my mind out a couple of times that's for sure

    Last time... New York City... man did I party hard there pahahaha

  • Bob Fox
    March 4, 2008

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    Lol

    Though I never did drugs I have spent many an hour in the pub. We call them bars here. But in youth it was great with good friends. You have brought it back to mind


    • Abe 1
      March 4, 2008
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      ta bob
      i wrote dat a while bk now
      thought i would put in on focus
      my mates r grt 2
      its like it ere
      lol


  • ZoeAsh1117
    November 27, 2007
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    alittle confusing but very kool

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