Walking through the black mist
We walk this doomed trail
Following our loved ones voices
The craws of the black birds
That sometimes shows our worst fears
They lead us to the places
Where our loves ones died
They tell of our time
When we will lie beside them
For eternity
With deep agony
Reflected in her eyes
She walks this destined path
If losing her beloved
Her in her black dress
With staggering steps she follows them
Though she doesn’t want to see
She follows them across the heartbroken earth
To were her love is meant to be
Destined by
The black birds
Author notes
i hope this is ok
i did picture e
good luck with ur contest
A contest entry
- Another Sad Contest!!! {{Picture & Song Quote Inspired}} by PerfectImperfection.
685 points, ended December 12, 2007, 34 entries
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Comments
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awsesome ,
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This is a sad and endearing take on the picture chosen. Showing much of what can be seen beneath the beauty of the image. Thank you for your entry!
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Fantastic write. Seriously amazing
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this is a powerful take on the prompt and its powerfullywritten sissy from the picture.yet it holds the sadness in it
love you sissy
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