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birthday and thankyou wish

My sweet carer of mine
You are my wall and my rock
You pick me up when I fall down

Your the most beautiful person
I have ever known
With out you I am not sure where I would be

Your heart overflows with love to every one

This is my thank-you and happy birthday
Gift to you

Just letting you know
I will always be in your debt

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  • DolphinLass silver member
    November 27, 2007
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    great poem good luck


  • Frozentearz
    November 27, 2007

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    Some wonderful thoughts put forth
    for a special man on his special day..
    Blessings to you both.
    Frozentearz


  • Errant Panther gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    Thank you so much for such precious sentiments. I know you do not always feel able to express yourself in this way, I sincerely appreciate it when I hear you speak these words. I am glad you took part and wish you the best also.


  • poet2angels gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    Oh, how lovely!
    Such a heartfelt poem for a deserving person!
    TY for your dedication to him!

    Lynda