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Selling candy coated Apples

Candy Coated apples
Lined on the shelf
Waiting for you to buy
And eat them up,
Making your mouth stick
Give them a try,
You won't be sorry
They'll be the apple's
Of your sweet eye!

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Just thinking about those apples from fall...*sighs*

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 27, 2007

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    Yummy candy coated apples how i love them this is a sweet piece thank you for sharing this with me best wishes and much love


  • crimsondew
    November 27, 2007
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    Well written!

    Sounds tasty....Send some over...

    • Beverlynohime
      November 27, 2007
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      ok o.o they aren't around anymore...though... only in the fall.


  • She burns
    November 26, 2007

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    Awwwww beverly the syrup this is so sweet and loving, just simple and from the heart, joy and smile


    • Beverlynohime
      November 26, 2007
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      ^__^ Thank you for your comment! lol...I hope this poem was to your liking.
      Your waitress,
      Beverly

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