Calling all cars
Looks like another victim
Icy Traction and Black Ice
Makes for dangerous conditions
Get some ambulences on the double
Make the snow tire tracks
Seem somewhat subtle
I feel sorry for those of you
Who are new today
You will see so much
And if you survive
Someday you'll say
That was bad
Even the memories will cut like knives
You'll try to get the people out
But they won't budge
Others will be burried in this wierd sludge
Just forget, its their blood
You will think you've see the worst of it
Keep thinking that, you will see that
You are wrong
Calling all availible Emergency Vechilcles
I94 On the double
Good luck
In a list
A contest entry
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800 points, ended February 15, 2008, 34 entries
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Comments
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wow, you and cars, dont like the idea of it, its a good poem/song though and I like it, its got a nice rhym to it,
keep writing
Loveee
~Ashley~<3 -
uh huh
Thanks
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content 7.1
vocabulary 9.6
accuracy 7.3
creativity 7.2
theme 7.3
originality 7.6
totals-46.1
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