You look at me and think that
I'll fall for you again
After all that you did to me
You ruined me and you still
Think you're the
Only One for me
I look at you
With such disdain
Only you can make my
Tears and anger pour out like
An endless river
You smile at me like it's okay
But you know you're not
The Only One
And I'm not going to
Let you bring me down
Author notes
Only One by Evanescence
To Tasha-Linette:
It must be tough to manage your child and work when he's not supporting you anymore.
I wish you all the best in life, and he's not the only one for you.
Hope this helps (:
A contest entry
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i really like this poem Thanks for entering!
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great
I definitely liked this one very much! I could feel the anger burning inside this poem... i liked the phrase "tears and anger pour out like an endless river" genius! liked this poem very much! the emotions were raw! there was anger sorrow and hope weaved into this pretty short poem! amazing job my dear... and best of luck in all the contests! u shd win smthing!
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very well written, thanks for entering and good luck!
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I really like everything you say in this - it's very strong and independent, yet with some sadness in it too. But, I do think that you cut the lines in a weird way. Like, sometimes you just started a new line to make it take up more space. It felt forced. Bring the lines together. Longer lines and a shorter piece, would definitely make this better. I hope I'm clear enough with what I mean - I'm not good at explaining it!
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I like this. It's a great write. Thank you for entering the contest! Good luck!
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