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Are You Sure?

You don't love me
So why did you lie
I loved you so much
You know you made me cry

I thought you were the one
You were just so great
But now we're done
And you're the one I hate


Why did you change
I liked you how you were
I think you're durranged
You say you're still you,are you sure?

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  • Tazmanian Poet
    February 29, 2008
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    so flipping amazing.**jealous**


  • The Brokenhearted...
    December 11, 2007

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    This is really good! I know exactly how you feel! I hate thinking you know someone then you wake up the next morning and find that they are'nt the same person you loved. Keep writing from the heart!


  • pillowjoe
    December 11, 2007
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    powerful bravo haha rock on i could see this being a song actually


  • Scars-On-Her-Arms
    December 5, 2007
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    wow

    wow this was pretty good. i really liked it.
    xxx


  • XbeautifulyXbrokenX
    December 4, 2007
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    yes! this happen to me!
    but i love this poem


  • xXemosoraXx
    December 3, 2007
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    so true.........


  • Scrambles
    December 1, 2007
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    I like this one!


  • emo-freak
    November 28, 2007
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    liked it

    i thought it sent out a great message. good job.


  • insainebuni
    November 27, 2007
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    ok the dude that commented you is hot and booboo i love this poem so much


  • xryanricardx
    November 26, 2007
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    oh yeh i can relate to this quite reasonalbe

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