Dreaming of you in the dark
Feeling you so near while we're apart
Then I don't feel so alone
Hearing your voice on the phone
I read all your letters devouring each word
With each line I capture everything that's occured
When I miss you so much deep in the night
I have all the love on the pages you write
So that when I feel blue
I go back to the start
And read once again all the words
Straight from your heart...
A contest entry
- Cheer Up a Depressed Girl by Snow-Flake.
630 points, ended December 14, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Well I actually felt like the rhyming was a bit forced and the first stanza not only didn't make much sense but it also kind of repeated itself. Oh and I wasn't all together sure how this fits the option of a love letter. There is no dear or sincerely ... it holds the qualities of just another love poem. ... Well thank you for entering anyways.
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