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This was the right feeling turned inside out. She had found everything she was searching for still it all felt so wrong. Her story begins quiet you could even say cliche. A few flings in junior high you could hardly call boyfriends and a few highschool heartbreaks. Nothing ice cream, sweatpants, and dancing around her room like a freak couldnt cure.

This kid was a walking nightmare. He swept hearts into his black tornado without mercy. After a year and a half of being sucked into misery, her best friend rescued her. She had lost her heart, her friends, her confidence, and herself. This was her first mistake; When she should have gathered the strength to fight her way out, she just prayed for prince charming. He delievered freedom, and she fell for him. After eternity in the eye of the tornado, this felt like heaven on earth.

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it is what it is. i dont care for critiques or comments. i just simply needed to get this on paper without it actually being on paper where someone i know will read.

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