About me
me as a person
well...
Factotum
everything else
is what I am not:
I am not a professional
that will analyze you
I am not into ics
I am not an ist
I am not into isms
that want to convert you
I am not an acrate
I am not an acracy either
that would exclude you
I am not convinced easily
but I listen regardless
I am not afraid
to simply laugh or cry
I am not the person
that will impress you
I am in no hurry
to get to what
comes next
A contest entry
- Who You Are 3 by BeMeBeInsane.
300 points, ended December 11, 2007, 5 entries
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Comments
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life itself is ajourey...but in that journey ...we learn, love, laugh and live! basically it's what we make of it!
Keep penning on oner stroke at a time!
Bill
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indeed when others
would have us be as they are,forsaking who we are in the process.
It is ok to share interest but when we berate others beliefs or unbelief we are over the line.
Thank you Bill.
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no overbearing vanity and narcissism is good ,
the honesty of your being prevails in your writings.
(good luck on the contest)
side note - sorry i didn't get a chance to hang out, I had a different agenda that day and had to deal with some things.
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I am humbled by your comment.
I understood you where in another realm.
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I agree, this is very clever. My favorite lines are 7,8,11,12,14,15 and the last 3 lines. Of course, what's in between these lines pulls it all together to make it such a good poem. Very nice.
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Really you helped brew this poem
my friend now you know my secret to not being what others expect not to be better or full of flash and confettie but just to not be what everybody labels us is...well now I need to go see my shrink.just kidding poetry is cheaper and the scedule is more flexiable.
IN INK,
DABBLER
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Very clever and intriging write! I loved it !
Goodluck!
~Lisa~
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Thank you
There are many people who would have me be something they can judge my commitment on.
"So what are you not?"lol
In ink,
Dabbler
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