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Moon Gaze

I gaze each night
as I shake my slumber
for my ride
across the sky.
There sits the bench
on the river bank
ready to welcome everyone.
Tonight
it stands alone
in this cold wind
with only dead leaves
for it's company.
I stand by
a little longer
showering all I have
on the bench,
for it has always been
my companion too.

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  • Shamanicmusings
    July 31, 2008

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    A tide of ethereal shadows lilac breezes floating.
    I loved this,this is how your words made me feel,
    becalmed at night.


    • crimsondew
      August 1, 2008
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      What a lovely feeling...yes the moon does wonders when you listen to her...


  • Entwining Beauty
    November 28, 2007
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    such a beautiful poem good luck in the contest


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 26, 2007

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    Beautiful Piece!! Crimsondew, I wish you the best of luck in my contest. Thank you for entering and following the rules Cara


    • crimsondew
      November 26, 2007
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      You are most welcome...It was a pleasure meeting you...Hope we clash again soon

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    This is a beautiful piece my friend goodluck to you in this contest.Best wishes and much love always


    • crimsondew
      November 26, 2007
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      Thank you so much for your lovely comment...Much appreciated

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