Under the linden trees
I will always remember your voice
Calling Calling
Whispering sweet words of love
Painting colours in my life...
Many dreams and many lies
You left me
Waiting waiting
Under the linden tree
And all the colours faded away..
I saw my name written
A thousand times across your heart
But it was fading and dying
How could I still relax?
Was our love not meant to last?
From Under the linden trees?
So here I sit
Singing my lonely song
Will you join me with your paints?
Will you come back for me?
I shall always remain
Under these linden trees
Author notes
Everyone knows the Numa Numa song by OZone or Haiduchii, maybe O Jao Nee โอ้เจ้าหนี้ (thai), Bu pa bu pa (chinese), Shabu Shabu (chinese), Ma Yia Hi (vietnamese), Noona Noona (Korean).... Kinda encorperated (or tried to) these remakes. But these lyrics (in romanian) kinda hit me... so yah.
A contest entry
- How does your favorite song describe you? by Aiyoris Maryian.
800 points, ended December 5, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is very original. The peace that comes from this is exciting. I appreciate this scenery.
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Beautiful poem and my favorite part was the repetition of "under the linden trees." The ending where you come together in song and painting is excellent. Good luck in the contest!
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