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Where is our Hate

If we share a love so dear and true.
Then where does hate lie in me and you.
We care for each other with a heart,
And speak words of truth to each other.
We know our weakness of others hate,
But we still have our own spot for love.
If love and care are all in our heart.
Then hate must not exist in our mind,
We feel no hate towards others, thats true.

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Sudokien form.
I'm gonna extend it later.

please comment even if you think its junk tell me what you think

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  • Glasyalabolas
    November 30, 2007

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    This piece fits the form very well. Well worded and the emotion and message are solid.

    Good write.