flakes vault like feathers
from angelic firmament~
in downward spirals
A contest entry
- Winter Haiku by Swan song.
480 points, ended December 5, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Like a gymnast! I like where you took this original in thought showing movement and beauty
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the images are kind of delicate, but sharp as well... the downward spiral lends a dark feel to this piece...
do you need a
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how pretty is this...
you are displaying your soft side sir...
quite attractively I might add...
this is charming...and sweet!
you have been slinging pretty ink tonight cowboy...
wow...
Blessings! Tammy
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