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Sensual Flight

Quake,
surrender,
dictate,
Unite.
Intertwined.
Iris' interlocked,
Bearing down on souls,
As two become one.
Hearts flare,
And Passion flys.

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20 words, exactly

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 27, 2007
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    Aptly described, I can relate to this one, thanks for your entry into my contestlol


  • sassylilpoet silver member
    November 26, 2007

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    thanks for that sensual flight, you summed it up so beautiful, with so few words, of course , true love, needs few words