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Inspire Me

She,
With her head in her hands
Sheathed in black
Willing the time
To hurry up and bring
Her 10 minutes closer to freedom

Inspires me

He,
With the pencil in his hands
And the paper on his desk
Gazing through the window
Creating pictures
Instead of notes

Inspires me

That snow,
Only to be seen by us
For a moment
Before it drifts below
The small hole we call a window
To be viewed by some
Other lucky person

Inspires me

Her,
With the attentive eyes
And the paper filled
With words and words
And words and words
Of note-taking
Covering up the scars
Behind her eyes

Inspires me

Him,
With the green eyes
And that look
Of stone and uncertanity

Tapping the pencil

On his desk

 

Inspires me

 

You,

Standing in this mine of despair

Holding the only key to our future

Looking at us

And doubting everything you see

I just ask that you

 

Inspire me

Author notes

Another not-so-good poem. Oh well.

A contest entry

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 6, 2007
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    Very impressive, I love the style. Bravo


  • Nostalgia
    November 26, 2007

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    It was actaully rather inspiring...(sorry bad joke ) I like how everyone in their own way inspires....Nice write. Good hopes to you in the contest.