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Huh? oh, IVE got rhythm.

do it nightly, oh.

we
gonna

take a minute, hey.

no, i dont dance (well)
but
i can lay down my chronic dispassion
like so many forsale signs.

we gon' bring it back, oh.

syncopations and sympathies
work it like its (actually,
not at all) the last dance party
in the grand old Nap'.

don' be
a
fraid

ill take
a
chance.

one little chance.

jus' one.

and
alluvasudden
the music stops and
the explosions start.

hey, a queen size bed ain't
best used for sleepin', no.







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  • love the last lines....lol....this was something different, which is good, because I love the different...nice use of creativity to


  • SatinSheets
    November 27, 2007
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    That was definately different.

    But different is always a good thing.

  • darknessinside
    November 27, 2007
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    Ummm...interesting
    but being creative gives you points on my list!