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just dead

As i sit and write
I have a battle growing with in
Alone,cold with nothing but pencil and paper as my friend
As i start to write the words down
They shatter in thin air
They just plainly disapear
So im stuck here writing a poem that has no meaning,not one
But my emotions fall off the page
Because anyone who understands
Anyone who has felt
Anyone who knows my kind of pain
relizes that this poem about nothing is what keeps me sane

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 27, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Sometimes things just don't come out the way we want them too....you have done a great job of portraying the feelings you say have fallen off the page... well done

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