Chasing a white rabbit down blackened hole,
Wholly perplexed where poem’s journey will end,
Ending downstairs, where bunnies have control,
Contrary to what kitty will pretend.
Previewed by love bird reigning high in cage,
Caging adult view from their sofa perch,
Perhaps finches paired will take center stage,
Staying close together, for lover’s search.
Searching for smallest clue written below
Beaming bunny, cursive meaning’s control,
Conforms inner spirit to things I know,
Knows that, Love is the Essence of the Soul.
Author notes
wreath
My avatar-I created it myself off a graphic I found online years ago. A nice little bunny-I have house rabbits. I have alot of critters, they are all mentioned in the poem. It is always fun here, I never grew up. But there is a little motto underneath the bunny, "Love is the Essence of the Soul." I think it holds great meaning for me, and I use this avatar on most forums/sites that I visit. If you see it, it is me.
A contest entry
- Avatar by ea.
525 points, ended December 1, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I love bunnies, too and I thought your poem very creative.
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Thanks, azure. Interesting to know the story behind your familiar avatar and that you are a pet lover.
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