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Purple Haze

Your hands caress my gentleness,
and wash away my pain.

The shadows of night, plump with delight,
cast moonbeams in your eyes.

Your gaze, enchanting, like a purple haze,
leaves me breathless beneath the stars.

I'm helpless in your embrace; or can you not
see how you've enraptured me.

Sublimely divine, we both intertwine, two spirits
become one, this is destiny.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    Nicely done! Lovely metaphor and soft feel of love...the ending strong and well written.
    Thank you for entering!