Mirror Mirror on the
All go fuck off you simple minded bitch
Why do you speak to you this way
There's no wonder you sit here alone
reasons are plenty for me to leave
want a razor blade
shit your not even worth a new one
Oh look a tear, you soft hearted cunt
Hey me I bet your one of these morally upstanding folks
that believe in true love
Where Camelot comes to your rescue
where prince charming and you live happy ever after
wipe your eyes you dumb virgin believing bitch
what's that a different look
All poor little virgin bitch getting mad
You suffer for your moral cause
For your virginity you stand alone
And for this you are pissed at you
Just do it, pick it up
it just a mater of time
so end it now
Mirror Mirror on
Oh hear we go again
Mirror Mirror on the wall
let me bare it all
You fucking cry baby
if you were to bare it in the first place
you would not be asking to now
Mirror Mirror on the wall
let me go
let it flow
Hey Me in the mirror
I had enough of
I do stand alone
A virgin bore I may be
So I thank you
For making me see
My fight is worth waging
Now go fuck off bitch
A contest entry
- Abandoned by Yours-To-Have.
600 points, ended December 10, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oh holy hell
DAMN
awesome
love the anger
keep it up
i love it
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wow it gave me shivers, very deep writing and the swearing it to me is just so appropriate
Well done Joe
Cin -
It's hard to say who will win this argument, the repressed Miss Goody Two Shoes or her more wanton, lustful side. It's a slight chance, that her rage will keep her from using that razor! And I can definately feel the RAGE...
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I like how you were yelling at the person abandoming you in the first place. That takes guts, but I really don't like swearing. It was still awesome though. Good luck and keep on writing!
Feeling-Blue
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She is fighting with
herself, you can see this in the way its written...joe
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Dam Joe, pretty hard on someone!! But sometimes you just have to say fuck off!! To whoever and whatever!!
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My Dear Friend,
This is one heck of a read! I don't think I remember ever reading something like this from you. One can feel the anger in your words. You did a great job on this one!!
Best of luck in this contest!!
Nyetta
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wow this is so violent, nice! i like it, good job!!!
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