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My Lilac Girl

Every thought of her
is somehow
turned blue,
my lavender girl.

A contest entry

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    December 10, 2007

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    Very poetic, I like the format of this piece and the simplicity of the imagery included here, finely woven, thanks for entering


  • Whyitt U
    November 27, 2007

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    Excellent write for the prompt...I think I'm in love with that picture Good luck!!

    Wyatt xxx


  • Blueskywonder
    November 27, 2007

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    WOW!This is intriguing and most sensual poetesse.
    An wonderful write