As you leave me I bleed,
Lay to rest with the soil and weeds,
Looking up at the sky,
Feeling able to let myself die.
You never saw the scars you left,
Never saw me struggle for breath,
When you went you started this,
From my lips you drained my last kiss.
If only you loved me like I do you,
If only you could see what you put me through,
My heart was damaged when you came along,
Now laying with death is where I belong.
I doubt you’ll cry a single tear,
Share a thought for us in passing years,
All we shared is what I held close,
Now I am clinging to wreckage, no hope,
The wreckage you left in your wake,
Is the very last hurt I can take,
You filled my heart with promises so false,
Now out with the key to my heart you do waltz.
You told me I was your special one,
That I complimented your moon with my sun,
All the while words coated with deceit,
You finally ripped my world from under my feet.
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This is one of my new emotional poems
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wow
this is an amazing poem!!! Never have i felt such emotion with words such as these. I can feel everything through your words.
Great write, really just great.
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b e a u t i f u l
oooh!.. this is so beautiful!.. i ((love)) it!!.. i almost feel like im the one who got hurt.. i dont really now how to explain any better how this makes me feel.. im not very good on giving compliments.. but i really really f'n love this!!!..
As you leave me I bleed,
Lay to rest with the soil and weeds,
Looking up at the sky,
Feeling able to let myself die.
You never saw the scars you left,
Never saw me struggle for breath,
When you went you started this,
From my lips you drained my last kiss.
ohh so beautiful.. your emotions just bleed from these words!.. beautiful!
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Sad
Makes me feel sad reading this poem, really deep. i can relate to it -
this is gorgeous. you took the absolute worst feelings of unrequited love and turned them into something beautiful.. so many people can relate to this poem, if not everyone, and you did an absolutely lovely job of writing it all out.
"If only you loved me like I do you"
that is a beautiful line, and a thought that's unfortunately run through many of our heads at some time or another...
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