Only expirence under the circumstance,
love, lust, and kisses to boot.
Burned touches of smoke and asphat,
scrapes and bruises all over the skin.
Sticking touch and warm findertips,
turning up the heat and the pressure.
Mistakes turn to riches and fame,
bloody messes to the mass of hurt.
I come back to the burning motions of hurt,
cremation to the mind and soul.
Body dying and tears flying everywhere,
I'm a broken machine of his use.
I want him to love my being,
so I give and hurt and surcome to his solutions.
kisses overwehling but radiating warmth,
I'm overcome with happiness of the heart.
I dont' know what to think when I'm with him,
he think his thought for the both of the weakness.
Body and soul overcome with warmth,
crammed into a tight space of unreceading confidence.
No one will find out about my hurt,
I love him so much and my body loves it too.
But the colors all mix now,
a mess I will have to deal with later.
Author notes
Being hurt by the person you love
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I know how it feels to be burned by the one that you love and it really does kill you inside. Whether it be physical violence, verbal abuse, abandonment or a mixture of many things or others, it hurts for the one you love not to show they love you back too. I have gone through that recently. They certainly do haunt your dreams and thoughts.
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wow. that's tough! we all know the feelings of being hurt and let down by the person you love. Disapointment is the worst thing. i love how you describe your feelings in this - the wording is really good. Good job!
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