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Miss Perfect

I'm little Miss Prefect!
Everyone loves me
Everyone trust me
I'm the most responsible one

'She will never do anything wrong'
'She will never lie'
'You can always count on her'
'Your grades are so perfect'
'Oh you're so talented'
Just a few off the songs
That play in my mind everyday

I can't do anything wrong
'Cause you're always looking
And expecting things form me
But I'm only a child
I can't be PERFECT!!!
WHY PUT THIS LOAD ON ME!!!
MOM I HATE YOU FOR THAT!!!!!

You no what I have a secert to share
I'm an alcoholic
Yes mom...I sure as hell LOVE to drink
My grades...I cheat and copy and lie
Yes again...mom
I'm not what you think
That night I stayed out studing
Ha!I was with my boyfriend
Yes mom...I do have one

You made me this way
And I'm glad its your fault
This is the only time
When it actually wasn't my fault
The rest of times it was all me
Everytime you blamed my sister
It was me mom.....

YOU SURE AS HELL SCREWED UP MY LIFE
MOM OH MOTHER DEAREST
I LOVE THAT IT'S YOUR FAULT....


Author notes

People think I'm such a goody goody girl!but i'm just a normal girl who likes to have fun and I'm not perfect!I make mistkes also!

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  • Crazy-Teddy666
    November 27, 2007
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    wow i love it keep writing grl!


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    November 26, 2007

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    Amazing poem. very strong wording. great job, good luck in my contest.
    xo
    kandy


  • Cari Cullen
    November 26, 2007

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    Wow I seince alot of hate there mate! But yi our mothers cant reaaly tell what our lives are...it was your chose to drink not hers..but still I love this poem lass, and its not my turn to be smaking you with a adult words...just be careful on drink'in it can kill ya sonner then yi think...

    HUGS MATEEEEEEEEEE