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Falling Out Of Love

I stood strong and I lived threw each day.
In every way that I can I am trying,
I am trying so hard not to fall,
And in the end I know I'll be crying.
Because falling was the one thing that I never wanted to do
I hit rock bottom and had nowhere else to go.
Now that I am here, well things cant get much worse,
Cuz there is all these unanswered questions that I want to know.
Why did I have to fall, and hit the ground so hard?
Was it just a wakeup call, so I would open my eyes?
And if its true that you never know until you've tried,
Then why is it I still don't understand why this feeling dies?
The throbbing in my head, it hurts everytime I think.
I never thought I'd fall in love, and I didn't.
I fell out of love and crashed to the ground.

Its easier to hit the ground then to be caught.

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  • lil k
    December 17, 2007
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    this is so ture and i like your writeing


  • Emonessia
    December 4, 2007

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    this is a great piece of work. i really like the ending, its powerful. i can relate to it a lot at this moment in time, it has a lot of depth to it. keep writing xXx


  • daddys girl08
    November 27, 2007

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    wow that was written very well, and i'm glad i read it when i did, me relationship just fell apart and things haven't been so great for me the past couple of days. thanks for the words.....