Push Point
By: Julia L. Clark
Empty lot of a wicked state of mind
The signs are darkness in fog as
The dialog of hop away in to the
Shop mart of sell me food to
Cancer my soul and kill me in sense
Of mildew mold.
Tell me why you run away from the truth
Of my words when I open your eyes
They blink but do you not see
I am poof in smoke of
You my dear imperfect human
Will choke on reality
If your not seeing the signs of please
Push point your knowledge and
Gather with me the fight to eternal
Ever lasting life.
He or she that stands before you
Pour you up in a nice champagne of idiot
and you glorifying in smile
Not knowing disrespect is so file
Its casting you
And mapping you
And trapping you
And zapping you
In death of
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© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved
Author notes
Push Point
Is In Spoken Word Form
One Must Not See The Words
And Read Them But Take Knowledge
of Them
Julia L. Clark
In a list
A contest entry
- What You Want by Cerbie20.
380 points, ended January 18, 10 entries
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Push Point
Comments
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Snap snap!
The fog veils the light of truth until
the wind of wisdom blows and the sunlight
of enlightenment opens the eyes of slumbering
fools drunk on cheap ass wine. Nicely worded
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why thank you honey like you said this is my square deep side you know i love my spoken word now i have to handle this here now thanks this one of my favs.
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Wow,
I shall share the wisdom within your pretty little smile, as words seep through the concrete.. How your strawberry kisses taste so sweet. Your poetry so unique. Love the soul you share, standing there, body bare. I'm on my knees, begging please.. You look at me, and vanish within the fog, and I'm standing there, lifeless. -----Who knows Hun--- Thanks for the inspiration, lots of love, for I have lots to share, peace.
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stop it
i shall just spend a day at your house and read you are amazing hon your work just melts maybe all the ladies hehehe love ya
Jewels or Mrs. Lady Enthralling
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I'm just becoming familiar with spoken word i guess its nearest form here in jamaica would be "Dub"
but this was very intense!-
a riveting escalation of emotions that softly subsided with "exhale"- which still couldn't be called the anti- climax for the images wrought by the poem had an unfading persistense.
you write stunning erotica, i"m happy to see your talent in other arenas
(sorry for ranting here, he he)
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everyone is intitled to what they feel hon
if you know what i mean your pen is your
pen and dont hold what your on voice feel
through the emotions of ink.
thanks fro reading
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i love it....it was soooo beautyful
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thanks one of my fav pieces
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I like this a lot, you have a very intersting image with the "dialogue of..." portion. i'm not quite sure what to call the poetic device, almost some sort of reverse personification? anyway works really well, i'm sure it sounds great aloud.
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thanks dear
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AMAZINIG
You penned a beauty! This is n.i.c.e.
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wow
your eloquence amazes me..hehe..you pretty much put it straight down the line with no apologies..in your face..love it..
Pour you up in a nice champagne of idiot
wow..what an amazing line..thanx so much for sharing..quite a talent you have..keep penning..keep it powerful..namaste...
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powerful imagery - kind of stark... it definitely makes a statement... I would love to hear this spoken...
the ending, again, sticks with me and I find that portion especially powerful...
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love u thanks hon
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I love your spoken word writes
This says so much of our society today
Thought provoking sis
Love you
~sugar~
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wow... this one was really good. i like the 'pour you up in a nice champagne of idiot.'
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thanks
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Well done sister.
Had to click on you to refresh my memory on who you are but glad you checked me out b/c I'm feeling your style. What inspires you. You flow and I'll be here to watch you continue.
Oh, where does the name come from?
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the name comes from a club i peform at in houston, texas also the name of my debut book. to b honest some of the strangest things inspire me i'am honored to have you stop by
Jewels
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I neva told you something was my favorite
u have written another generation of stories but
this one is a fav to me
love you for ever
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i miss you got a quick minute
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bravo bravo i have so much admiration for my aunt
you leave me speechless woman every single time
tick tock its your time most definately
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love you niece muah...
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i have never read are encountered such work
You my dear imperfect human
Will choke on reality
If your not seeing the signs of please
Push point your knowledge and
Gather with me the fight to eternal
Ever lasting life.
exhaling you
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Beautifully Penned
full of food for thought, and wisdom about the world today. send us a positive massage..love, Novt
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thanks mrs E love you
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my lady
i heard this directly from you
because i know ur voice
i put you in to my deck
and bumped it
i love you
xxtrinxx
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stay faithful i will be bac soon soon soon
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ever neva read nuthin like this ma
you made me creep on a nuter level
very thinkable
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i'll check you out when you get time
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