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my father

I know little of my father,
There is little I can say,
But he was great in his own way
he gave love at his best,
Although not many could see,
He did what he believed was right.
He was a man,
Who suffered uncontrollably,
Who never knew how much he was loved.
he was a man,
Who gave everything he could,
Until he couldn't go on.
The man I hardly knew,
I will always remember,
As my daddy.
I love you wherever you are.

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  • suicideQueen
    November 30, 2007

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    this was well beautiful
    a real tear jerker
    the "awww" kind of poem
    so muc emotion and feeling
    im sure your dad, wherever he is would be very proud to hear such words, im sure any dad would