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I'm Only One Angel

The pressure that bears down on my heavy heart
Threatens to tear my personage apart.

My aura's transparent, your gaze sees right through,
There's no telltale hint of its once vibrant hue.

Who am I to reveal your untold story?
Whilst my own being fades to obscurity.

When the world turns to darkness and walls fall to dust,
The hope that once glimmered must give way to trust.

For the flowers that bloom from this uncertainty
Light the way for a future where angels fly free.

I'll break free from my prison when you send the sign
That your heart is open to eternity in mine.

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One angel in a dying world

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  • poetryality silver member
    January 19
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    Yes! You share with the reader a real love. Not one that affixes itself to fantasy but one that depicts the pain that loving someone can also bring. A rich darkness weighs itself temporarily on the reader here dear heart! Yes! This, I love too!


    Always ♥

    Mom