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Regret

Im sorry mother for the things i've done
Im sorry father for stealing your gun
IM sorry sister i wasn't the best
Im sorry brother I'm just liek the rest

I've been told life is too good to waste
But they haven't tasted what i taste
They haven't seen life through my eyes
They haven't heard their souls screams and cries

All of you who said you care
But when i need you your not there
And when i go you'll realize what your losing
My mind is made up theres no more choosing

I miss you baby but your never coming back
You were all i loved so my heart is darker than black
I had no friends, no family, your all i had
So now im begging you, please dont be mad

The gun raised to my head, and has been cocked
All the emotion inside, I've closed the door and locked
So now it's just you and me and what i have to do
The only way for me to be happy, is to die tonight to be with you

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  • PamelaS23
    October 30, 2008

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    i like this

    i injoyed this poem it says what alot of people are feeling and are to afraid to admit it you did a good job


  • vampyz
    January 27, 2008

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    interesting

    this is an interesting write. i've always been a fan of rhyme. great job! i enjoyed it especially the first stanza.


  • xxtainted-faeriexx
    December 14, 2007

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    Im sorry mother for the things i've done
    Im sorry father for stealing your gun
    IM sorry sister i wasn't the best
    Im sorry brother I'm just liek the rest


    i felt that litterally make my stomach drop. that was good, it hurt and brought memories and made me remember everything I wanted to forget.
    that was good, I like the way you worded it. I love your poems, you do a good job.


  • Borntowriteforever
    December 3, 2007
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    THis poem is very expressive and sad. you did a good job capturing the emotions. love it!


  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    wow so sad

    that was so deep and dark and full of emotion. the two lines "All of you who said you care
    But when i need you your not there" really hit home for me becoz i so often feel that. you expressed it all so beautifully. i hope youre ok and get through this.

    xx


  • Silly Rabbit.
    November 26, 2007

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    Wow... This is great. At some points I felt it was really strong because it reminded me of my past and some similar things that I used to say, think, and do.
    I'm sorry if this is personal, I truly am. I know how it feels and I really hope that you are able to get through this okay and alive.
    Stay strong.
    ♥

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