muscles taut
breath suspended
heart beating wildly
arms encircling
momentary apex
consuming physical love
hold me close
sense the power
Author notes
Rapturous 20/20 words . . the ecstacy of powerful love
Contest Romance/option #9 - Making love
A contest entry
- The Rapturous Twenty by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended December 2, 2007, 29 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Passion by ScreamedConfessions.
300 points, ended January 14, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A very powerful write. I could feel my stomach muscles go taut aand almost feel hot breath on my neck!
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Congrats on the bronze! A lot said in 20 words...Well done!
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Beautiful word choice, intense emotion, raw and real vibe. Not bad. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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The power, well, it really works for moi...thanks so much for this entry into my contest
lol
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