Trimming some nose hair.
A great help for smelling,
the foul-scented rose.
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Hope you enjoy reading this short write.
And by the way this not haiku (I just realized thanks to haikumonk ).
this is a short verse.
A contest entry
- Exhale by Exodus.
525 points, ended December 13, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critics and critiques are welcome :)
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I know this is not a haiku but it can be a zappai.
This piece, short yet exact or to the point. I like the flutter of light humor and the logic you've placed here. Nicely done. -
Very amusing and I was totally unprepared for this!! I was intrigued by the title and you didn't let me down! Gave me quite the chuckle...
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amusing
i admire how you put the idea into words especially the topic has the olfactory sense on it...which you have successfully elaborate it to become a visual stimuli on anyone's imagination...Cool!
plus it was helluva creative haiku
new to me
I like it
Anna Lee
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This I could understand if the prompt was 'inhale' but I don't see how it works with 'exhale'. Either way it was an amusing piece
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Alright this is new approach..lol...like it...All the best!
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