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I Am

The dust of ages past
mutes my spirit.
I cannot walk as a mortal.
I cannot see behind me.
And the future, if one exists,
is lost to the here and now.
Flesh, bone and the substance
that lubricates it
are topics of fantasy.
I am only what I am.

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    Nice depth to this piece, delving into past, present and future. Thanks so mcuh fopr your entry
    Gaylene


  • Oceanqueen
    November 26, 2007
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    Very Good. Good luck in the contest.