Fuck you, you fucking fuck!
I'm really trying not to hate you but I'm having no luck.
I can't seem to forget all the promises you made.
You told me that I was the only one and that our love would never fade.
Eat shit, you fucking prick, you left me high and dry.
I suppose there was no better time to leave than the day my father died.
If I could take it all back I would have taken my father’s advice.
He was right when he said you were you were a dirty rat, and now I'm paying the price.
I am eternally perplexed by the idea of you.
I am helpless to comprehend the evil shit you put me through.
I often wonder what I did wrong to deserve such suffering.
Then I accept that it's my fault for putting my heart out on a string.
I want you to pay for all your sins.
I want someone, anyone to rip out your heart.
Hell hath no fury like this woman scorned.
Fuck, as far as I’m concerned I wish you’d never been born.
I was so good to you; I was loyal and I was true.
I did anything and everything that you asked me to do.
I was your lover; I was your friend, I would have given my life for you.
Still you betrayed me; you disgraced me, and left me looking like a fool.
How about, you take a trip far, far away.
How about you suck a dick and admit that you’re to blame.
Maybe if you're in the mood you can jump right off a cliff.
Or maybe you would prefer some pills; I think you catch my drift.
I assure you I'm not bitter, and that my motives are surely just.
I’m simply dead inside from all the lies and consumed with disgust.
You were a cheat, a sneak, a creep, and worse you played me all along.
It is my belief that someday soon; you'll reap what you have sewn.
A contest entry
- Lost and Lonely feeling Helpless by GypsyEyes.
550 points, ended November 30, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - i quite sincerely wish i could fuck off completely. by j-ay rose.
550 points, ended January 20, 2008, 17 entries
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300 points, ended November 29, 2007, 37 entries
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330 points, ended January 7, 2008, 5 entries
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1100 points, ended June 27, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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so so very angry... thank you for entering my contest.
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I think it would be safe to say that you are angry?
Powerful poem.
Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck.
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Guilty
Wow! this is quite good, very modern and moving.
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"I assure you I'm not bitter, and that my motives are surely just.
I’m simply dead inside from all the lies and consumed with disgust."
Those lines were awesome together. This poem really rung from pain and a feeling of vengence. Karma will come around to that person. Great poem. -
Judge Says
OK,this is what I am looking for in my contest! You cursed but didn't rely on it to express your feelings! Thank you for getting it! I enjoyed this and you are now in the finalist list! Good Luck!
~Dommi
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