Velvet pillows
are your lips,
softer than an
orchids petals,
I float
in the heady dew
of our new love.
A contest entry
- The Rapturous Twenty by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended December 2, 2007, 29 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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'heady dew' like that...Congrats on gold!
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You took me in with you, wow, thanks for this entry
lol
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simply and lovely
fresh as new love blossoms
blessings,
Michelle
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Short and simple, yet very romantic. I love it!
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