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My Poetic Inspiration

My inspiration for writing
Comes from deep inside

Thoughts fall like petals
Leaving nothing to hide

Ink flows on paper
In poetry I confide

Times I am happy
To send my love to show

When I am sad
It is more a better flow

When I am at piece
I want the world to know

When I dream
I wish it comes to a glow

I write about my dog too
All these things inspire me

It is fun to be a poet
My mind is always set free

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 6, 2007

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    This is a very nicely done piece. Your flow is pretty good and the rhyme is good but a little forced it spots. But I do like the theme and thoughts here. Good job!

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    You certainly are inspired, Maria. Poetry seems to have played a major role in your life. You certainly bring inspiration to all of us with your beautiful writing. Keep up the good work. Very nice poem. Love Brian