I'd like to share that feeling,
Icy rain on my sultry skin,
My scarf pulled tighter,
Wrapped around me,
Keeping the ice at bay,
Never the less,
I find a strange sort of warmth,
In these last few months,
My favourite time,
Snowy mountains,
Frosted lace on spider webs,
Frozen lake,
Upon which I glide,
The strangest feeling deep inside,
Snow that covers land and tree,
Christmas time is almost here,
As I sit in front of love's burning log fire,
I watch the frosted moment glow,
My true love in seasoned form,
This is my November,
A contest entry
- OPTIONS CONTEST! COME ONE! COME ALL! ^_^ by Beverlynohime.
540 points, ended November 26, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Seasons... [prewrites permitted] =] by sora..
600 points, ended September 20, 2008, 59 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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eep! =D
the imagery in this is just gorgeous.
i have only seen snow twice in my life,
and this induced the resurfacing of those couple of memories.
good work + good luck.
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Thanks
I'm Georgia by the way x
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Wow the imagery in this is amazing! I can almost feel the ice and warmth from my scarf! Thank you for your entry! ^_^
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Reading this makes you feel a bit cold lol. I like your descriptions for this piece nicola. good luck in the contest.
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