Drowning in pure bliss...
Embracing tender kiss...
The choice I made was true -
I want to be with you
...Forever...
Author notes
.... Yeah ...
Looking deep within his eyes,
she soon realised,
the words she held amiss,
were to be placed upon his lips...
(woah ^ also 20 words exact. Nyce)
A contest entry
- The Rapturous Twenty by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended December 2, 2007, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Feedback please! Your eyes words help my vision... :-) Cheers for looking :-D
Comments
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Beautiful poem. Short but beautiful all the same. I like this. I normally am very sarcastic and I tend to have a harsh attitude in aspects of love, but this is very sweet and very nice. I like the one in your author's note, too! lol. Good work!
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Please edit, I need one more word...thanks
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sorry about that. Done
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Thanks for editing and for your excellent entry, this is a grand write for the prompt, I think lol
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