When it's cold outside and snowing
And the fire is gold and glowing
If you're looking for warmth inside
Let it snow, snow, snow for all time
And it looks like the weather is set
It's time for egg nog and mistle-toe yet
The lights have a soft, soft glow
When it's white outside with snow
Even though it's cold outside we're so warm
Safe and snuggled inside from the storm
Sitting here by the Christmas lights
All the presents in their wrappings so bright
The fire light is soft and glowing
While outside it's still snowing
We can stay here warm inside
Let it snow, snow, snow for all time...
Author notes
'fluffy'
A contest entry
- Let it snow in your poems!!!! by Tirrell.
450 points, ended December 6, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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I almost don't know what to say, I really enjoyed this poem! The flow was great and it just made me grin! Thanks for your entry and good luck!!
I'd also like to give you kudos for actually writing in the author notes, It makes me happier to know that some people read what I wrote! -
I love this!!! Thanks for posting in my contest and all the best luck at judging. Merry Christmas, Cathy
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As a person who tells it as it is
I find this verse unrhythmical unless you have the lines set to some definite tune. I was at first impressed with the variation endostanzaically and the rhythmic repetition exostanzaically. However, this broke down towards the end. Still, a fine try at a song lyric of winter 'snowtime'.
Lyndon of the Winklings.
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Roflmao!!! this is beautiful in its immagery and I love the fact that it can be sung to the tune of let it snow! Beautiful, definatly has the spirit bright!
Thank you for entering!
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