I wake up
go look under the tree
moms drinking cofee
whats on tv
get a bit of money
its really kinda funny
the lack of love and compassion
presents arent even wrapped in
bows and tinsel and paper
theyll fade away like vapor
with dad one day
mom the next
have a merry christmas
spelled with an x
don't go to church
I am not worth a prayer
I am just some kid eyes covered by hair
christmas for me well
it never snows
just really cold
no love
no hate
just your average mundane
day of the year
like easter or new years
another added fear
celebrate the birth of christ
just to watch him suffer and die
sugar plums dont dance in my head
christmas leaves me feeling DEAD
A contest entry
- Christmas is coming.... by islekine.
525 points, ended November 28, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this is honest
Comments
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Actually, though the grammar was terrible, and some of the lines cheesy....I really liked this piece. The emotions you display....I really liked it, and that doesn't happen much. Great job. Your ending and passion was superb...I on;t wish you had a better Christmas....
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you wrote this so well... I agree you deserve so much more than you are getting in your life. i do so wish I could make it better.
Jesus is your best friend talk to him out loud you can tell him any any thing.Love and hugs
good luck change your back ground so she can read it and tell her you have.=)
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So is this...lol
I can't read this combo...it kills my eyes...
Write on!
*PEACE*
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