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[ with a chip on your sholder, ]

with a chip on your sholder,
a bruise on your leg
everyone will soon be dead

with blood at your feet
and a gun by your side
the pity of one, when one does die

with revenge running through your veins
only gun shots hear your name

it's funny watching someone suffer
after all, they call you a cutter

after everyone has fucked you over
you only have one thing to show her,

the end of that barrel, looking so sweet
only need one more to be complete!

...?...?...

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  • xxEMZxx
    March 2, 2008
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    Hmmm... thats just.. yeah. don't actually do it.


    • JUGULAR vain
      March 3, 2008
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      it's not me if you read it the way it's ment to be read, it's you em....... killing steph.


  • ultimate beluga
    December 7, 2007
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    by the way, i tried to applaud you with that, but apparently i "don't have enough points to applaud". whaaaaatever...

  • ultimate beluga
    December 7, 2007
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    fuuucking eeemooo...
    okay you know how i feel about your scary depressing writes... i think this is very good, very quickly and to the point gets your message across. its very clear and pretty powerful...
    i like this hippy, but if its based on truth at all, i will kick your arse!
    xx