Locked in love,
my life fused
into his smiles,
his frowns,
until one day
I stood
in front of the mirror
to find someone
I did not know,
Is this love?
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prompt:Estrangement
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This is a very good and we all have these feeling in our life some more then others thank you for sharing this with me much love always
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thanks for your lovely words....
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I guess at some time we all see things differently. I have stood in the same mirror, and wondered the exact same thing. Excellent take on the prompt here poet. Thank you for this entry and I wish you the best.
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