blind man going to finish crazy thing in square,
facing light continuously,,
a dull sight
in dazzling light of glance...
with overflowed cup, after drunkard, noticed
more adrift in smoke, a ship to drift in sea...
in labyrinth of gentle dream,
don't find short cuts, tracks
in burning eyes, in your kiss
in lines of being be lost!..
Author notes
prompt: Estrangement
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A contest entry
- PIF - 10 Poets/10 Lines/1 Hour by poetryality.
525 points, ended November 26, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is a perplexed work that has many layers and mixed messages. I am for certain that estrangement can cause this kind of emotion. For sure! A very unusual take on the prompt but stellar just the same. Thank you for this entry and I wish you the best in the contest.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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