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Was It Rape?

An invasion
Pain
My mind begging for me to please stop
The hands on my hips, pulling me down
Separation of soul
You said you wouldn't ever hurt me
But it tears me apart
My body aches and quivers
And all the while
I say it's to make you happy
I sacrifice my body
To make you happy
If I did it to make you happy, but my mind begged me not to
Is it rape?

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  • darkangel-darksoul
    November 26, 2007

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    great work

    rape can come in many forms. u did well with this poem. i hope you find the answers your looking for and that you keep writing