For everytime you make me cry,
my tears the angels come to dry.
For all the hateful things you do,
the angels come to hug me too.
For all the mean things you say,
the angels wipe my tears away.
All the things you've done in vein,
again that's when the angels came.
So come on, send more evilness,
I'd really love to feel an angel's kiss!
Author notes
I have in laws who just cannot stop saying hateful things to me about my 18 year old son's death, they have so much fun watching me cry and knowing they have caused me more pain and depression, so I wrote this to them!
(goats)
A contest entry
- enter or die (jkjk jus another contest) by EmmaDilemma93.
415 points, ended November 30, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i think you should have got a gold for this one.
The Goddess takes our blessed ones,
Our hearts exposed with blackened blood,
Our Mothers, Daughters, Friends and Sons,
Leaves us trudging through this rancid mud
Your in laws sound like arseholes and I can't understand how they could be so bitter and hateful,
Blessed be my friend and know your son, wherever he may be, is looking down on you with a sweet smile. Think of him doing that when they are so cruel.
hugs,
georgie,
xxx
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some people can be so cruel! but remember this my friend... karma catches one when they least expect it!
watch and see!
Kee penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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A VENTING DEEP AND HONEST!!!
I too often get many who only try to hurt. It is never easy and always hurts very deep.
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awwww i like this piece.
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Oh my gosh, this really fits the way I feel a lot of the time, not only with my inlaws but also with my soon to be ex husband. You have such great talent. Keep up the good writing. Always,
Tasha
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Really powerful.And,I too would hand them a copy of this and tell them to get bent...
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wow i love it
great way to get emotion out
and thank you for actually reading the rules
=P
i love this poem
and it says a lot
if i were you
i'd accidentally
leave a copy of this poem
at their house..
=P
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awwww
Some people can just be so cruel. I see people do it all the time and yet I dont get it. What does anyone get out of being cruel and hurting another? Its sad. God bless you my friend. You have a good heart and a good outlook. I wish you well in this and the contest. God bless you, Mark
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Oh My I'm So Sorry
You've endured enough pain for the rest of your life. People are so ignorant sometimes. This is a great write for your defenses are angel's kisses. I'm so glad you sent me this write for I do understand. People have talked behind my back and it hurts. Because my son overdosed! You are a good person for you have been there for me before on the loss of my son! I'm so so sorry for your loss, your precious baby son! May God bring you many of angels, army's of angels to comfort and protect you and I. Blessings to you today and everyday.
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Fabulously marvelous.
I really enjoyed readng your poem!! It was quite intreasting! Very well written and keep up the great job!!
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Wow, fantastic write. Sorry to hear about your son, that must be harder than I can imagine. A nice simple yet emotive poem. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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Good luck on the contest.This makes me think of my exhusband.Some people can be jerks can't they.I want Angel kisses to it's a good outlook to have I think it can get you through anything.Great job,my hats off to you.Thanks for the chance to read it.
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