"If I could just sing well
I'd sing only for you;
If I could just touch the
sky, the moon, the sun and
the stars; I'd be an angel for
only a minute;
If I could just stay nights
without sleep
I'd be thinking only about you;
If I could just walk on the water
I'd have such a power and I
would not drown;
Oh now baby!
If I could just love you
I'd be forever happy."
by Fernanda Vargas Freire
what do you think this poem is about?
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Thank you for all of your kind comments (:
This write is truely amazing. I absolutely love it!
"If I could just touch the
sky, the moon, the sun and
the stars; I'd be an angel for
only a minute;"
This definately had to have been my favorite stanza (:
Thank you so much for sharing this piece.
Best wishes,
Kati Anne
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Thanks Kati!!
It is nice to share something that people like
Have a nice day!!
-Fern freire
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This is a great poem. The greatest thing in life is love . It knows no bounds as you said and can make you forever happy
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Dragonheart - Thanks for leaving a comment
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one of the sweetest thing ever!!!
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Thank you
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This is absolutely beautiful, I really enjoyed reading through this. I loved the utter sense of such a giving person here and such pure love. Well done for this, it is wonderful.
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HAPPY 2009!!
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This is simply beautiful. I love it!
Very well written.
~*Lady Serenity
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Thanks for commenting
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that was really well written
felt the connection
great work! -
well, well fern, it looks to me like you have been through a rough patch, these words and sentiments seem to come from deep inside your heart. A lovely piece of work and thankyou for sharing it with us. Val
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Yes! My kind of write! I love this! It has a natural flow to it and the words captured my heart! I love this! Great write!
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