Sometimes I wait,
Sometimes I do it all,
Sometimes I just tell you to do it,
Sometimes I wonder,
Sometimes I realize,
Sometimes I know that
I'm not doing this right,
I'm not living my life the way
I'm hoping- that
I'm wrong,
Don't you wish I could spruce it up?
Don't you wish I would interest you?
Don't you wish I weren't messing with you?
Don't you wish I was making sense?
Don't you wish I wasn't asking these questions?
You hope this will just be over with,
You hope I will just finish,
But I have more to say,
But I have more to do,
But I just have to say-
I'm waiting.
For you.
Author notes
option 5... Kinda wierd, just let your imagination fill in the blanks
A contest entry
- enter or die (jkjk jus another contest) by EmmaDilemma93.
415 points, ended November 30, 2007, 10 entries
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Comments
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ok this is GREAT i love it
you did a great job finishing it
and i'm so glad you did
because now it's like amazing =]] -
hmmm
good
interesting..
needs more
work on it
or leave it how it is
it's good
but had potential
i will hold the contest open for you if you want to
add to it
if not then leave it how it is
either way message me
i really like this..
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