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The Good War

The men march up
The men sit down
and await

The coming through
The bursting through
of the gate

They sit and they listen
They sit and they boil
in their hate

Ambush in place
It's now time to kill
for the State.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 28, 2007

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    So sad

    We are damned if we do and damned if we dont for since the beginning of time . Every critter on earth has a predetor where we are our own predetors


  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    November 26, 2007
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    Oooh dark and true, this bites. I love it.