`
I use stones,
water, candles,
and dreams
[cards
are not for me
it doesn't work]
I chant
in my recital
with spirits
Believe me,
a forbidden smoke
will make me
believe in things
not believable.
`
Author notes
November 25, 2007
Inspired by the word 'cannabis'
A contest entry
- c by grass.
500 points, ended December 6, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is ridiculously awesome!
there's this one passage in Marilyn Manson's autobiography that talks about his first time smoking pot. this piece reminds me of it so much. you've got something absolutely great going here! this is definitly on the finalists list.
I appriciate your time and the entry. -
Excellent poem and its music is almost a chant in itself! Good luck in the contest!
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