High above the city streets
I thrash and roll and grind my teeth
At the atrocities down below.
I just can’t stand to be so near
The screams the cries the pain the fear
Of the weakness that they show.
I just look on with distaste
And prey upon the lives they waste
Shoving them on to death’s door.
They can’t refuse they can’t deny
They’ve met their end it’s time to die
So I step down and wage my war.
Mingled in the city streets
I use my hands I use my teeth
To send them all on down below.
Release the hate release the fear
I slice them all from ear to ear
And they all die in the electric glow.
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They can’t refuse they can’t deny
They’ve met their end it’s time to die
So I step down and wage my war.
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i love that very much
this is very nice andi love the tittle
thank you so much for entering
and good luck -
The end really grabs me as does your rhyme. I like the scheme a lot and it kept me interested. Thank you for entering.
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wonderfully dark, I love this sort of poetry thanks for entering and good luck!
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It Is dark, but opens many doors of curiosity within my mind, In short, Elegantly performed, and great vocbaulary.
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WOW.....
O.O
I LOVE HOW YOU SET THIS UP!
And i ESPECIALLY love this paragraph:
"Release the hate release the fear
I slice them all from ear to ear
And they all die in the electric glow. "
I'm a pretty twisted individual, LMAO
THE FLOW IN THIS IS FUCKIN AMAZING! It's so much fun to read.....kudos and good luck in the contest
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